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@meso "I was looking for a job and then I found a job"
Redundant, used the same word twice, sounds stupid.
"I was looking for employment then I found a job"
Doesn't repeat words, still gets the point across, only one extra syllable and can still flow with the original line
Twrrible song writing
Redundant, used the same word twice, sounds stupid.
"I was looking for employment then I found a job"
Doesn't repeat words, still gets the point across, only one extra syllable and can still flow with the original line
Twrrible song writing
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@meso "and if the double decker bus crashes into us"
Unrelatable, stupid, not enough syllables and feels abrupt. Doesn't fill the line entirely
Vs "and if the hatsune miku bus crashes into us"
Relatable, perfect amount of syllables
Unrelatable, stupid, not enough syllables and feels abrupt. Doesn't fill the line entirely
Vs "and if the hatsune miku bus crashes into us"
Relatable, perfect amount of syllables
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@creamqueen > Noel Gallagher called Morrissey "the best lyricist I've ever heard"
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